Establishing your ideas clearly using what you have been taught so far along with simple camera shots/timing.
- Feedback: Modify action details.
The previous action has already started turning to the right, so when the next camera angle is given, it should already be looking to the right.
- Feedback: Add camera transition details.
The camera zooms in towards the eyes and transitions to the next scene.
- Feedback: Add character action details.
The boy moves forward slightly towards the underground to create a sense of disappointment.